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Selasa, 25 April 2017

How to Make A Good Essay


How to Make A Good Essay


Some of you probably have learnt about making a paragraph or well-known as essay. Actually, making an essay is easy for us to do if we know the whole steps of its. Here, i would like to provide you some ways to make a good paragraph. Basically, this note is a reaction paper that i wrote after i had learnt it in writing subject in third semester. Hopefully this note can help you to write your essay easily.
In making a good essay,the first step that  we should do is decide a topic. If we had decided a topic, it will be easy for us to develop this paragraph into a good essay. Thus, to make a good essay, there are some steps/methods  to be followed. It is to avoid the repetition or confused from the topic that will be written by the author and make us easy to write it. These parts refer to parts of the Thesis Statement.
What is Thesis Statement?
The Thesis Statement is the most important sentence in essay. We may say that Thesis Statement is a part of essay. It is the main idea which cover up all content of the essay and give direction or number of body paragraphs. Clear Thesis Statement will be produced a good written. Those parts are:
First, Topic and Controlling Idea. Thesis Statement has two main parts: the topic and controlling idea. Topic is the subject of the essay and controlling idea is something that the author will say/write about the topic. So, the topic and controlling idea have a connection.
Example :

                Detective Conan has been the most wanted comic since 1994

In this essay, the author should explain why Detective Conan comic could be interested by many people. In making essay, its not only covered up by the topic sentence, but the author also tell to the reader what the author is going to say about the topic. Therefore, we need to put the controlling idea.
We can see the example above, Detective Conan is the topic of the essay. While, the most wanted comic since 1994 is the controlling idea of the essay.  

                Second, Predictor. The predictor of a thesis statement tells the reader how many body paragraphs there will be in the essay and what their content will be. For example,

                It is the cultural,economic, and governmental centre of Denmark make Copenhagen as a capital and most populated city of Denmark.

In this statement, the topic is Copenhagen. The controlling idea is a capital and most populated city of Denmark. The third part of this thesis statement lists the three reasons that the author believes were most important : cultural, economic, and governmental. The third part of this thesis statement as predictor, because it predicts the number and content of the essay paragraphs.
               

Third, Rules for Thesis Statements. It have 5 rules, which are:

1. A thesis statement must be a statement, not a question.
2. A thesis statement must be a complete sentence. This means that it must have a subject and a verb with a tense.
3. A thesis statement is an opinion; it cannot be a simple statement of fact. A fact does not need any support, and therefore we cannot write an essay about it.
4. A thesis statement must state the controlling idea. This means that we must state our position on the topic; we cannot simply announce the topic of our essay.
5. A thesis statement should have only one controlling idea.

                Fourth, Guidelines for Introductory Paragraphs. Introductory paragraph is the first paragraph in an essay. Without using this in the first paragraph, the essay seem to be awkward and non overview. We need to make the reader feels curious about our essay. Thus, the purpose of the introductory paragraph is twofold which are to get the readers’ attention and to introduce the subject of the essay.

         There are several guidelines for writing a good introductory paragraph.

Ø  It must be relevant to the topic; that is, it should not introduce material not covered in the essay.
Ø  It should not preview the points that will form the body of the essay.
Ø  There should be at least two sentences before the thesis statement. In order words it should be a minimum of three sentences.
Ø  The thesis statement should come at the end of the introductory paragraph.

There are some types of Introductory Paragraphs :

Anecdote ; Anecdote is a brief story that illustrates our topic.
Interesting Facts or Statistic ; To write this kind of introduction, the only thing that we should remember is having enough knowledges. We should know some real or factual information based on our essay. Usually we can find it in journal or newspaper.
Historical Introduction ; it is not meant to be a comprehensive account, it simply provides general historical background.
General to Specific ; this is commomly used to introduction. Usually the author begins the introduction by general topic and then goes down until the specific point. We must remember to keep the introduction relevant.

             All in all, in making good essay, it has some rules and methods that we must follow. Make sure that we decide a topic and controlling idea first, before we are going to write the essay smoothly. Then, try to avoid the repetition of the essay to acquire a good essay.
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Sabtu, 22 April 2017

Globalization as an Opportunity for The Development of Muslim Society


Globalization as an Opportunity for the Development of Muslim Society

1. Introduction
Globalization has brought some changes in whole aspects of the world dynamically. For examples, economic development, changes in social life, political aspects,and even religion itself. According to Meuleman, “Globalization may be defined as the process leading towards an increasingly strong interdependence between increasingly large parts of the world, resulting in the phenomenon that events and developments in one region influence most other regions” (Meuleman : 2002, p.2). This phenomenon also influence the human being to construct their life systems, as Baylis and Smith (2007) said, Globalization is where political, economic, cultural and social phenomenon have a very strong impact among each other. It is also believed as an unstoppable phenomenon, giving opportunities to people who are prepared and threats to people who are not.  

2. Discussion
Now talking about globalization, we cannot separate this between society and religion. Islam is one of religions which is increasingly spread out in this time.“ Modern technology in transport and communication has promoted an unprecedented degree of interaction between Muslims across the world, especially those belonging to the middle and upper classes, forging new links in scholarship, trade, commerce and welfare programs.” (Ayub, 2016). Those changes have provided an opportunity for Muslims to rise and develop their religion side through economic, politic, education, and culture.

2.1. Economy
2.1.1. State of the economy at the present time
In globalization era, the standard of the country can be measured in terms of its economy. Economic life also has become a standard of individual and collective life of a nation-state. Therefore, economics has become one of the most important things to advance the nation. We can see that global economy has it ups and downs, but it has been increased in recent time. As what Walle has argued  that,“Economic globalization as the ongoing process of international economic integration. The term captures the notion that various forms of interactions between national economies are increasing” (Walle : 1998 , p.9).

2.1.2 Economic regulation in Islam
Islam also has a rule of governing the Islamic system based on the Quran and life system and tradition from Prophet Muhammad (PBUH). For instance, a role in promoting the economic system. Sadeq has pointed that, “ the index of economic development in Islam consists of economic growth, distributive equity and Islamic values” ( Sadeq, 1987). Muslims has have an opportunity to rise the economy through Islamic system. The result of its development can be seen at Islamic Banking.

2.2.3 The opportunity to promote islamic economy in global
Since the sub mortgage system in US has failured in developing the economic system, Islamic banking began to apply in secular nations. In the early of 21th century, Islamic bank generally operated around muslim nations. Consequently, crisis that faced by global community caused the secular nations like Hongkong, UK, Singapore and Japan started to implement the new system of banking in operation, that is Syariah banking. Many international banks and non-banking financial institutions in western nations also began to apply it. Manzoor (2013) stated that, “ The terrific international banks such as HSBC, Standard Chartered and Citi Bank take the great effort to promote the Islamic financial system in these nations.” He also added that,”The Islamic economists argue that impervious interest rate and monetary policy create a huge pressure on normal economy.” Therefore, financial crisis basically happened because of the erroneous monetary policy and high interest rate system cause the borrowers to impecunious.
The reasons why muslims believe that Islamic banking is better than non-Islamic banking are, Islamic bank as an economic institution also take charge on economic development of people, islamic banks do not offer interest to customers because it leads to riba, Islamic bank is more secure, and the facilities as complete as conventional bank. As what Panda cited from Chapra (1995), (p. Unkown) He said that, “The banks would be playing an important role in economic development and the general welfare of Muslim ummah if they could make the resources mobilized by them available, either directly or through the non-bank financial institutions, to entrepreneurs, who have the potential of putting them to productive use” (Panda, 2005, p. 31,as cited in Chapra, 1995,).

2.2. Politic
2.2.1.  The primary of political implementation in Islam
In Islam, political side governed by the rules which adhere to Islamic law. As what Meijer has affirmed that, There are three archetypical strategies that have been implementing by modern islamic movements in order to fulfill their expectation to gain the power and to build up an Islamic state (Meijer, 2009). He also outlined those three archetypical strategies which are ; the first strategy is focus on Da’wa (preaching), that purposively to spread out and urge people especially Muslim people to follow the rule of Sunnah that leads to better life. The second strategy is called Hisba, as a means of commanding good and forbidding wrong. And the third strategy is Jihad, as the obligation to prevent any violence. Thus, Muslim people believe that the more pious society will appear the more political power directly produce a fair and wise leader. In the other side, Munir also stated that   there is no Islamic system of government, but there are many systems of government which become Islamic because they follow the Islamic principles (Munir, no date). Besides, she also asserted that “  Formal sharia as it is practiced today in Islamic states has demonstrated a strikingly different image of Islam as it is supposed to be.”

2.2.2. Globalization in current politic
Talking about politic, we cannot hide the fact that politic has always been connected with the differencies of culture, tribe, gender, socio-economic, nation, and religion itself. Politic is not static, it will always change according to the conditions that have occured around society in the world. The current of political globalization come about “the clash of civilization” (Norris and Inglehart, 2002, p. 236, as cited in Huttington, 1997, p.141). After the incident of 9/11, muslim people especially in West have received many insults and accusations of being a terrorist by non-muslims. 
At the same time, Islam has widely spread throughout the world. From the differencies of nations, Islam arise with many civilizations. Hence, muslims considered Islam as ”unity in diversity” (Praja, 2007). While Western has been empowering themselves in modernize their nations in all aspects, muslims have been asked about their preparation of  modernity as western has executed. Praja also stated that,” Since the nineteenth century, Muslims have struggled with the relationship of their religious tradition developed in pre-modern time to the new demands of the modern world.” We can conclude that Islam has been invisible developed. Then he  provided that, “The spirit” of Islamic civilization developed more rapidly in the West synergized by the philosophy of capitalism in economy and secularism in the politics. Both capitalism and secularism supported by sciences, technology and the military had created the Superpower State, especially after the Cold War” (Praja, 2007). Thus, the evidence shows a significant changes in Islamic civilization.

2.3. Culture
2.3.1 The origin of culture
Culture has been created by human kind in the world, that’s why we cannot live our life without culture and even culture itself. Culture would not be existed without human intervention. Therefore, culture means that a shared system of meanings, beliefs, values, behaviours through which experience is interpreted and carried out. As what Pickthall said that, “  Culture means ‘ cultivation ‘ and, generally nowadays, when this word is used alone, it means ‘ the cultivation of the human mind.” (Pickthall 1927).

Islamic culture presented early and predominantly in eastern, especially Arab during the expansion of the Islamic empires. the culture is created as the rapid spread of Islam brought by Prophet Muhammad as its followed his traditions. Basically, Islamic culture generally covered all the practices that has command by God (SWT) which have developed around Islamic environment. The cultural practices are contained in the Pillars of Faith, including in Quranic such do prayer (shalat) and fasting ( in Ramadhan) and non-Quranic such Islamic life system.

2.3.2. The barrier faced by the muslim community
The culture of Islam has been impletended by most muslims around the world, absolutely around muslim environments. The important of implementing it is purposively to build a harmonious life, as what  Pickthall argued that, “ The culture of Islam aimed not at beautifying and refining the accessories of human life, it aimed at beautifying and exalting human life itself “ (Pickthall 1927). Indeed, Islamic culture has widely opened, but muslims  often misunderstood by the non-muslims that leads to misconception. Because of the limitations and the differencies of religious knowledge that gained by muslims from birth, example in higher institutions or work places, they often get question which they cannot even answer, these problems confront Islam in a wrong conception (According to Da’wah Institute of Nigeria, 2009). Hence, this obstacle cause to misunderstanding.

2.3.3. Culture as the opportunity for the development of muslim society
Culture and society are not static, it will be renewed and reshaped as time goes by. Schalkwyk stated that, “ Cultural change occurs as communities and households respond to social and economic shifts associated with globalization, new technologies, environmental pressures, armed conflicts, development projects, etc” (Schalkwyk, 2000). Islamic culture has been developing indirectly, it is because lack of attention to the muslims’ life in the world. As what Islamic Learning Materials observed that, “ Many people won’t recognize Muslim culture, even though they see it almost every single day. That’s right. Everytime you see a new story about muslims in any part of the world, you are seeing some aspects of Muslim culture” (Islamic Learning Materials, 2016).

Those opportunities can be seen at First, side of dressing. Islam also has a rule of dressing, especially for women. In Quran, it also proofed the obligation of Islamic dressing, “ O children of Adam, we have brought down to you garments to cover your private parts, as well as for adornment, yet the garment of reverence is the best. These are some of God’s signs, perhaps they will remember”  (Quran 7:26). Let us take a look at terms of hijab, muslim women are obliged to wear hijab in order to secure protection for themselves. Altought a number of muslim women still do not wear hijab to cover up their head, several muslim designers have developed their idea to create a stylish hijab through media such instagram, facebook or another online media. Latiff and Alam have observed that, “ One of the designers said that her designs are more urban and sporty where she emphasizes it on the Islamic culture and how Muslims instantly identify with” (Latiff and Alam, 2013). Hence, muslims women are effected by the trend.

Second, the halal food, the more widely spread of Islam in the world, the more it  increasingly demanded. in the period of last ten years, the demand for halal products has been increased rapidly, as what NASDAQ OMX proofed that,” The halal food market has grown strongly over the past decade and is now worth an estimated USD667 million” (NASDAQ OMX, 2012). This opportunity has also certified by International Trade Center,   “A global market based on the needs and preferences of the estimated 1.6 billion Muslims worldwide has emerged as a powerful commercial arena. This creates opportunities for enterprises, especially in developing markets to take advantage of this estimated US$ 1 trillion market of the halal food sector” (International Trade Center, 2015).  This sector is rapidly attract the consideration of policymakers and the private sector as a sector with increasing growth potential. Thus, the opportunity of developing halal food more greater.
      
2.4. Education
2.4.1. The history of Islamic education
Islam began to raise around 1400 years ago especially in Eastern, brought by Prophet Muhammd SAW. In the period of  750 until 1050, Islam was in a “Golden Age” in the world among other religions. During that time, muslim people including scientists and scholars had been succeed in creating a huge developments and great discoveries that has influenced a number of important people in the world in present.

2.4.2. The challenges faced by Muslim society
Islamic education has undergone a lot of limitations in terms of access. It is because of the general education have dominated the education system in the world. Therefore, due to the lack of attention to the education of Islam, students who wanted to study religion tend to be difficult to achieve it. As Abdalla (2006) confirmed that,” it becomes clear that students in Islamic education institutions find themselves in dead-end sub-systems”. Thus, this issue highlights the difficulty for muslims to gain Islamic theology.

2.4.3. The opportunities and the development of Islamic educational in globalization era
Fortunately, due to the strength of Islam in establishing its existence as a unified identity, Muslims have the opportunity to gain more knowledge about Islam. Then, Islamic-based education has been widely applied in various tutoring area in every country. Its system mostly applied in schools, dormitories, and even in mosques. Besides the muslim students, educational institutions also received a non-muslim students who wish to study the Islamic religion. Douglass and Shaikh based on recent studies provided that, “ there are at least 1209 mosques ( masjid, pl. masajid ) in the United States, virtually all of which provide a program of religious instruction for adults and/or children, and 20% of mosques are associated with or sponsor full-time schools“ (Douglass and Shaikh, 2004, as cited in Bagby, Perl, and Froeble, 2001; Khalidi, 2000; Haddad, 1997). At the same time, they also showed that there are approximately 112 Islamic schools have operationed especially in United State, including primary, elementary, middle and high school (Douglas and Shaikh, 2004).
This opportunity is not only implemented in developed counties such US, but also in developing countries. Examples, there is an evolution in several universities in Nigeria. This evolution brings Nigerian students to the new changes which was formerly far behind its education. The changes has also been provided by Rufai and Adedeiji (2011), “ The membership of the commission consisted of equal number of persons from Britain, the United States of America and Nigeria.” Although there is an improvement in educational side, but most of graduate students still  failing in terms of compete. This point has also been highlighted by Rufai and Adedeiji (2011) as cited by  a former Presiden of the Federal Republic of Nigeria, Chief Olusegun Obasanjo at the 20th Committee of Vise-Chancellors’ Seminar in May, 2005 (p.3) said that, “Some of the challenges facing Nigerian University system today includes poor quality graduates, graduates with little or no skill.” Therefore, there are a lot of opportunities to establish the educational system by the strength of government.  

3. Conclusion
The purpose of this paper is to discuss about the opportunity for the development of muslim society in globalization. In this paper provides the evidences based on recent studies.
To this end, globalization has offered some opportunities for muslims to develop their islamic life system through economy, politic, culture and education. The evidence shows that, there are a number of progresses that have brought the Islamic economy through promoting syariah banking. In politic, Islam has modernized their Islamic political system and built a relation with Westerns. For culture, Islam has succeed to create their idea through fashion and make halal food goes global. Then, Islam has widely operated a number of Islamic educational institutions and mosques in non-Islamic regions. In the other side, a number of muslim community still far behind the development but other muslims also have struggled in developing their society by reducing the lack of modern era.




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Rabu, 12 April 2017

Did you ever feel stuck on something that you wish you would have done?



Did you ever feel  stuck on something that you wish you would have done?
Now it’s happened to me!

Lately, I was a kind of person who likes writing and drawing. When i was around 11th-15th year old (six years ago), i almost finished off six journal books and five thick diaries to write down all the things that impressed me at that time. My father often bought me some drawing books when i was a kid as well, then i started to draw as my routine. To be honest, i’m not kind of person who really loves study (peace). When i was faced with subjects such Math, Physics, Chemistry, or any subject that consisting of formula, i got dizzy immediately! That’s why i choosed social class because there is no art class in my school. Generally, i tend to do something that i love so far, even my mother called me as a joy seeker *mumble.
So,back to the topic. Since i am in college, i feel like my mood and passion of writing and drawing began to  disappear, some short stories that i made have never been posted or published anyway, its also due to the limitation of media that i used in several years ago. I don’t know why its occur. I know its not good! I should continue my hobby that has been lose, but again, my passion is began to disappear. Even my books which consisting of short stories had been packed long time ago and i forget where i put it.
Now when i go back to draw and write, i need a thousand times to get any inspiration and it makes me frustated. Then now i know, i give a limitation in those abilities. For you guys as my beloved readers, you may take some positive sides based on my story. I suggest you to pursue and go on all the things that you love to do, who knows one of those things  will be the greatest one and brings you a wonderful result (let’s hoping!). Because something that has stopped  will be hard to start again, but let’s try!

-Cheers     

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